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Today Today has been my parents' anniversary so we've had lunch together in a restaurant to celebrate it. Afterwards some of my parents' friends have joined us to drink tea and coffe, it has been a brilliant day! (:

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Today was my parents' anniversary so we had lunch together in a restaurant to celebrate it. Afterwards some of my parents' friends joined us to drink tea and coffee. It has been a brilliant wonderful day! (:

 

 

 

*****Brilliant is usually used when something is bright or shiny. Perhaps the words, wonderful or outstanding might be better.

*****Maybe someone can think of another word....

 

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Today has been my parents' anniversary so we've had lunch together in a restaurant to celebrate it. Afterwards some of my parents' friends have joined us to drink tea and coffe, it has been a brilliant day! (:


Afterwards, some of my parents' friends joined us for tea and coffee. It has been such a special day.


It is understood in English that you can only really drink tea and coffee so no need to mention the word drink, this is a more natural sentence structure certainly here in Scotland.

Because it was your parents anniversary then this would mean that in English that it is a special day, so again this would be a more natural way to express this as it was spent with family and friends.

Hope this helps.


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