Second Note - David Bowie Marathon

Yesterday was a great but tiring day. A cinema close to my apartment had organized a David Bowie marathon to honor him after his recent death and since I am a big fan I had to attend.
It started at 6 PM and the first movie scheduled was Labyrinth. That’s one of my absolute favorites. I had just watched it the day he passed away, but I watched it again anyway. I used to watch it when I was really young and, even though I didn't understand half of the stuff that was going on and the metaphor of the movie, I was always deeply impressed by David Bowie as Jareth and his charm. If given the choice, I would still totally choose to stay there with him, who cares about the baby brother.
The second movie was more like the recording of a concert and it was like being at a true concert, which I will never be able to attend now (not a David Bowie one, anyway). It was magnificent seeing him on a big screen like that. When he started singing Space Oddity I had a giant smile on my face.
Then, after a 30 minutes break – it was almost 10 PM by then – I watched The Man Who Fell To Earth. I had never seen it before but I loved it. It was really confusing, to be honest, but it was so good. He was so good! I fell in love with him a little more I think. The character was just perfect for him and for his stage persona. The last movie of the marathon was The Hunger (in my country it is translated in “Miriam wakes up at Midnight” which I find a really sweet title, for lack of a better word). I had already seen it before, with my mother, and we ended up crying like babies. I cried a little this time too. But it was really great, especially the atmosphere. It was after midnight and most of the people had gone home by then. We were moved to another room for this one and the chairs were really comfortable (we were almost lying down). If you’ve ever watched this movie, you know it has a somehow dark but alluring atmosphere to it and it was perfect.
The whole marathon lasted 8 hours and I was so tired when it ended. I had a splitting headache, I had to use the bathroom and I was hungry. But it was a really great experience a really nice way to say goodbye to someone who was really important to me during my whole life.

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Second Note - David Bowie Marathon

Yesterday was a great, but tiring day. A cinema close to my apartment had organized a David Bowie marathon to honor him after his recent death and since I am a big fan, I had to attend.
It started at 6 PM, and the first movie scheduled was "Labyrinth". That’s one of my absolute favorites. I had just watched it the day he passed away, but I watched it again anyway. I used to watch it when I was really young and, even though I didn't understand half of the stuff that was going on and the metaphor of the movie, I was always deeply impressed by David Bowie as Jareth and his charm. If given the choice, I would still totally choose to stay there with him, who cares about the baby brother.
The second movie was more like a live concert, which I will never be able to attend now (not a David Bowie one, anyway). It was magnificent seeing him on a big screen like that. When he started singing "Space Oddity", I had a giant smile on my face.
Then, after a 30 minute break – it was almost 10 PM by then – I watched "The Man Who Fell To Earth". I had never seen it before but I loved it. It was really confusing, to be honest, but it was so good. He was so good! I fell in love with him a little more I think. The character was just perfect for him and for his stage persona. The last movie of the marathon was "The Hunger" (in my country it is translated as “Miriam wakes up at Midnight” which I find to be a really sweet title, for lack of a better word). I had already seen it before, with my mother, and we ended up crying like babies. I cried a little this time, too. But it was really great, especially the atmosphere. It was after midnight and most of the people had gone home by then. We were moved to another room for this one and the chairs were really comfortable (we were almost lying down). If you’ve ever watched this movie, you know it has a somehow dark but alluring atmosphere to it and it was perfect.
The whole marathon lasted 8 hours, and I was so tired when it ended. I had a splitting headache, I had to use the bathroom and I was hungry. But it was a really great experience, and a really nice way to say goodbye to someone who was really important to me during my whole life.

Thank you for reading and correcting my mistakes :)

Second Note - David Bowie Marathon

Yesterday, was has been (past simple "yesterday" is an action that takes place once) a great but tiring day. A cinema close to my apartment had organized a David Bowie marathon to honor him after his recent death and since I am a big fan, I had to attend.
It The marathon started at 6 PM and the first movie scheduled was Labyrinth. That’s one of my absolute favorites. I had just watched it the day he passed away, but I watched it again anyway. I used to watch it when I was really young and, even though I didn't understand half of the stuff that was going on and the metaphor of the movie, I was always deeply impressed by David Bowie as Jareth and his charm. If given the choice, I would still totally choose to stay there with him, (who cares about the baby brother).
The second movie was more like the recording of a concert and it was like being at a true concert, which I will never be able to attend now (at least not a David Bowie one, anyway). It was magnificent seeing him on a big screen like that. When he started singing Space Oddity I had a giant smile on my face.
Then, after a 30 minutes break – it was almost 10 PM by then – I watched The Man Who Fell To Earth. I had never seen it before, but I loved it. It was really confusing, to be honest, but it was so good. He was so good! I fell in love with him a little more I think. The character was just perfect for him and for his stage persona. The last movie of the marathon was The Hunger (in my country it is translated in to“Miriam wakes up at Midnight”, which I find to be a really sweet title, for lack of a better word). I had already seen it before, with my mother, and we ended up crying like babies. I cried a little this time too. But, it was really great,. I especially liked the atmosphere. It was after midnight and most of the people had gone home by then. We were moved to another room for this one movie (This is not an error, but it better to reference the specific noun since it was awhile since you referenced the "movie".) and the chairs were really comfortable (we were almost lying down). If you’ve ever watched this movie, you know it has a somehow somewhat dark, but alluring atmosphere to it and It was perfect.
The whole marathon lasted 8 hours and I was so tired when it ended. I had a splitting headache, I had to use the bathroom and I was hungry. But it was a really great experience and a really nice way to say goodbye to someone who was really important to me during my whole life.

Thank you for reading and correcting my mistakes :)

Note: Another excellent and interesting story with very few corrections. Great job Rachele!