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Some Universities Require Students To Take Classes In Many Subjects. Other Universities Require Students To Specialize In One Subject. Which Is Better?

There are so many different fields for study nowadays and so many interesting subjects that young people have some problems choosing just one main subject to study. However, to make the correct choice is very important for success. In my opinion it is much better to specialize in one subject than to disperse your attention among multiple subjects. I will try to justify my opinion here.

Some universities propose a wide range of subjects for students to study regardless. Young people can take a biology course and an acting course at the same time, I think this is the wrong way to study. First of all, students have to know  exactly what he or she wants to study. You can ask - how can a young guy understand it? I will answer - studying in modern universities now is very expensive, therefore it would be better to know before going to university, probably in college.

Secondly, focusing on one subject can help to concentrate and discipline yourself. When a young man decides to study biology for example, he or she will find information about this subject, to read certain science magazines and articles about this subject. Sometimes it is not funny and amusing, but always useful.

Finally, I am sure that concentrating on one main subject of study is the way to success. Let’s imagine that one student decided to be an actor and biologist simultaneously. Did you hear about a successful actor who was at the same time a doctor of biological science? I believe - never. That is the answer. My humble advice for new students - take the one particular course and spend as much time as you can  studying  one particular thing and you will successful in it.

Therefore, based on the argument explored above I think a university can suggest many different subjects to a student, however a smart student will choose just one favorite subject and study hard.

Hello Stanislav,

This is a logically laid out text with some good points with some very good language, I have however rearanged some phrases to make them more natural.

Hope this helps

Bob