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A long time ago, when the first TV programme/show was broadcasted nobody thought how important TV would become in very next the very near future. During my routine day (or: every day, daily), I’m often asked about TV programs (or: people are always asking me...). “Did you watch it?” “Wow, it was amazing! enormous” ”I do not like Mr. Sami”, I say. Sometimes I feel very amused (or: it's very funny). The reason why is simple. I don’t watch TV. And it is my choice.

 To start off let me present strong features of defend/stand up for television. It's a great way to inform people. If something happens anywhere in the world, TV in short time immediately reports it. Another good side of TV is the entertainment it provides. One time, I visited my grandpa in the hospital. We were talking for about 2 hours. Then  in the second, I wondered considered that my grandpa would have been very bored, when no one was with him. Then, I looked up and saw a little TV. Of course my grandpa could watch TV, only when he paid for it. Anyway TV allows sick people to spend their time more comfortably in more comfortable way.
Moving forward, let’s talk about the disadvantages of TV. Watching TV can be very addicting. People prefer to sit on the sofa and become couch potatoes (than to....) .Because of this, society becomes overweight.

I could tell you more interesting information about TV. In my opinion it is an unnecessary and dangerous thing. In my opinion, TV gives us many opportunities, but nowadays it is used in the wrong way.

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Television - a blessing or a course? 

Long time ago, when the first TV audition was broadcasted nobody thought how important TV will be in very next future. During my routine day, often I’m asked about TV programs. “Did you watch it?” “Wow, it was enormous””I do not like Mr. Sami”. Sometimes I feel very amused. The reason why is simple. I don’t watch TV. And it is my choice.

For beginning, I would like to present strong features of television. It implies great way to inform people. If something happens anywhere on the world, TV in short time reports it. Another good side of TV is entertainment. One time, I visited my grandpa in the hospital. We were talking for about 2 hours. Then, in the second, I wondered that my grandpa should have been very bored, when no one was with him. Then, I looked up and saw a little TV. Of course the grandpa could watch TV, only when he paid put some coins inside. Anyway, TV allows sick people to spend time in more comfortable way.
Moving forward, let’s talk about disadvantage of TV. Watching series is very addicting. People prefer to sit on sofa and become couch potatoes. Throughout, society becomes overweight.

I could tell you more interesting information about TV. In my opinion it is unnecessary and dangerous thing. In my opinion, TV gives many opportunities, but nowadays it is used in the wrong way.