My first experience of high mountain climbing-Jade Mountain(Taiwan)
Jade Mountain is the most highest mountain in eastern Asia. It locates in Taiwan. I am close to it but I have never seen it until the end of 2015.I joined a party to get a valid permit.I rarely climb mountain in daily life.Before climbing Jade Mountain, Many friends of mine told me that I should do exercises to improve my lung capacity and physical power.We should check our components of equipment. If it become a impromptu climbing, you will suffer the discomforts of travel.
The common illness is altitude sickness. The mountain guide told us good methods to prevent altitude sickness.We should drink a lot of tea or salt water to supply electrolytes. My breathing should be deep and slowThe experience of Jade Mountain climbing is a preparation for going off to Tibet.I decided not to take any medicine for altitude sickness before this climbing. I wanted to test what reaction in my body.Through this opportunity I can more realize my body's situation.
Finally, I went up the summit of Jade Mountain. Although thick fog covered Jade Mountain, It is still beautiful and magnificent. In the meantime, I totally understood that I had altitude sickness. There are many symptoms.I
felt uncomfortable,headache and can't breath. I were really unwell at the second day.My footsteps were instability. I were exhausted and I did not want to go back . I determined to achieve the goal. Perseverance will push you keep going.You will be a resolute but you are still small in front of the nature.
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My first experience of high mountain climbing-Jade Mountain(Taiwan)
Jade Mountain is the most highest mountain in eastern Asia. It is located in Taiwan. I am close to it but I have had never seen it until the end of 2015 when I joined a party to get a valid climbing permit. I rarely climb mountains in daily life (haha, join the crowd! almost of us climb mountains daily!). Before climbing Jade Mountain, many friends of mine told me that I should do exercises to improve my lung capacity and physical power, and that we should check our components of equipment. If it become a impromptu climbing, you will suffer the discomforts of travel.The common illness is altitude sickness. The mountain guide told us good methods to prevent altitude sickness. We should drink a lot of tea or salt water to supply electrolytes. My Breathing should be deep and slow. The experience of Jade Mountain climbing is a preparation for going off to Tibet. I decided not to take any medicine for altitude sickness before this climbing. because I wanted to test what my body's reactions in my body.Through this opportunity I can understand more about realize my body's situation/condition.
Finally, I went up the summit of Jade Mountain. Although thick fog covered Jade Mountain, It was still beautiful and magnificent. In the meantime, I totally understood/However I realised that I had altitude sickness. There are many symptoms - I
felt uncomfortable, had headaches and can't couldn't breathe. I were was really unwell at on the second day. My footsteps were instability unstable/unsteady/unsure, I was exhausted and but I did not want to go back . I was still determined to achieve the goal. Perseverance will push you to keep going. You will be a resolute but you are still small in front of the nature.
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