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I fond of anime Hi! I want to tell you the reasons why I fond of Japanese cartoons - anime. 1. I'm interesting for Japanese culture, because it's unique country and people behaviors and thoughts different from ours. 2. Usually, anime teaches us to improve our skills (any skills), and main claim of any cartoons - "I must become stronger" - I like it! :) 3. Usually, cartoons created for kids, but anime - about more difficult things, like a wars, artificial intellegence, good and justice there, etc. and 4. I love how drawn anime))

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I am fond of anime

Hi! I want to tell you the reasons why I am fond of Japanese cartoons - anime.

1. I'm interesteding for in Japanese culture, because it's a unique country and people have behaviors and thoughts different from ours.
2. Usually, anime teaches us to improve our skills (any skills), and a main claim of many cartoons is (a main catchphrase or lesson from many cartoons is)- "I must become stronger" - I like it! :)
3. Usually, cartoons are created for kids, but anime can be (is) about more difficult things, like a wars, artificial intellegence, good and justice there, etc.

and 4. I love how drawn anime is drawn))

 

Nice entry! Just a few minor grammatical errors here and there. :)

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