My little sister
Who is this giant pink sandwisch that settled several days now in our bedroom? And why Mom and Dad call that package my sister? I’m staring at it and try to understand how it works. The bug has red hands and feet and she sleeps all the day! I noticed that everyone fears the creature, because we have to talk slowly, so that we could not wake her. When she is not sleeping, the beast wants to eat. It feeds in a very strange way and I think she is eating Mummy...
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My little sister
Who is the one that has settledput this giant pink sandwitch for several days until now in our bedroom? And why do Mom and Dad call that package my sister? I’m staring at it and try to understand how it works. The tapir(/bug) has red hands and feet and she sleeps all the day! I noticed that everyone fears this creature, because we have to talk slowly, so that we could as not to wake her. When she is not sleeping, the beast(/creature) wants to eat. ItShe feeds herself in a very strange way*1 and I think she is eating Mummy...
Interesting story. The bug is the creature that eats dreams, right? I think "tapir" is better word to express this in English (Actually we use this "bug" in my country).
The part *1 I don't grasp the meaning well. Hope you could check if my rewriting is right.
correction : changed the arrangement
(/correction) : You can use this word as well.
correction : added or corrected
correction : deleted
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