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About my last vacation :) In the last year my University was on strike for four months. So... I had a big vacation. When I made twenty years old in October 20th, my mother game me as gift a travel to Fortaleza (Brazil). We went to Fortaleza on November 3rd. We stayed at the Algarve Praia Hotel in the Iracema neighborhood. In the first day We took a bath on Iracema Beach, at night We bought some things at the fair. In the second day We went to make a tour in the Fortaleza's Center. But my favorite day was the thrid day. In this day We went to BeachPark. It was perfect. When We returned We went to the Planetarium. In the 4th day We came home :)

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About my last vacation :)

In the last year my university was on strike for four months. So... I had a big vacation. When I made became twenty years old on October 20th, my mother gave me as gift a travel trip to Fortaleza (Brazil). We went to Fortaleza on November 3rd. We stayed at the Algarve Praia Hotel in the Iracema neighborhood. On the first day we took a bath on Iracema Beach (perhaps you mean 'sun bathed'), at night we bought some things at the fair. On the second day we went to make on a tour in the Fortaleza's Center. But my favorite day was the thrid day. On this day we went to BeachPark. It was perfect. When we returned we went to the Planetarium. On the 4th day we came went home :)

 

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