New Year's visit to a shrine.
I went to a shrine three days ago.
It was first time to go to a shrine in 2016 because I caught a cold last year.
I made a wish and drew a fortune.
It was average good luck.
I was happy to see that and it is important to go to a shrine in New Year's days.
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New Year's visit to a shrine.
I went to a shrine three days ago. Good
It was first time to go to I went to a shrine in 2016. I didn't go last year because I caught a cold last year.
I made a wish and drew a fortune. Good 私は品本語を勉強しているので、分かります!他の人が 'drew a fortune' の意味が分からないでしょう。
It was average good luck.
I was happy to see that [it isn't clear what you mean here? happy to see that it was average good luck?]. and It is important to go to a shrine i on New Year's days. New Year's day (1 Jan) is a single day. If you mean on 1 Jan, then it should be day, not days. If you mean a period around 1 Jan, then you can say 'during the New Year".
明けましておめでとうございます
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