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the move Why you go to the move it needs to buy popcorn and coca-cola.When I was in the move for the last time. Around me everybody ate the popcorn champed, crunched. I was diverted it. But I liked the move

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The movies

Why do people need to buy popcorn and coca-cola when you go to the movies? When I was in the movies the last time, everybody ate popcorn champed and crunched around me. I was distracted by it. But I liked the movie.

 

 

Hello Alex,

This is one reason I don't go to the movies very often, and if you buy the popcorn, cola and sweets there it costs a fortune!

 

I rephrased the first sentence to make it more natural - we normally have time phrases at the end of a sentence. 'Diverted' is a good word but it is not quite the right word here, cars and water are diverted around something, sometimes planes are diverted to a different airport - it is more of a physical movement. The word you needed was distracted.

 

All the best

 

Bob

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The movies

Why, when you go to the movies, does everyone needs to buy popcorn and coca-cola? When I was at the movies for the last time, around me everybody ate the popcorn and chomped and crunched. I was distracted by it. But I liked the movie.


Hope this helps.

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