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Magic Wien I've just been in Wien, a very beutiful city and sparkling in this period. It was really cold, but I walked a lot, so I warm my self by moving trough the street, avoiding the horse-drawn carriages. I was amazed by Egon Schiele's exibhition, a touchy route through the incredible life of this beautiful and tormented soul.

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Magic WienVienna {we call Wien "Vienna" in English}

I've just been in WienVienna, a very beautiful city and sparkling in this period (because of the tinsel decorations in the street)*. It was really cold, but I walked a lot, so I warmed myself {better="I kept myself warm"} by moving through the street, avoiding the horse-drawn carriages. I was amazed by Egon Schiele's exhibition, a touching {more poetic="poignant"} route through the incredible life of this beautiful and tormented soul.

 

*By itself, "sparkling" is an odd description for a city, but I think that you used it because of the seasonal Christmas decorations, so I think it's clearer to add this phrase.

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Magic Wien

I've just been in Wien, a very beautiful city and sparkling in this period. It was really cold, but I walked a lot, so I warm my self by moving trough the street, avoiding the horse-drawn carriages. I was amazed by Egon Schiele's exibhition, a touchy route through the incredible life of this beautiful and tormented soul.

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