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We can not cannot go back in time
The Last sunday I watched the movie: The curious case of Benjamin Button, and there was something that an old woman said it called that caught my attention and broke my heart.
``´The loved persons people have to die to we for us to realize the huge space and importance they have in our life´´. I started to remember all the times that my aunt came to visit me and I didn´t want to wake (get) up to say good bye goodbye with a hug. Now she is not in this world and I can not cannot/can't go back in time and give her a hug.
So go and say: I love you to someone you love because you never know when it's/ it is the last good bye.
Hi Indira,
The red text are for corrections and the blue are suggestions to allow your piece feel more natural.
The rest of the entry is perfect, and I like the sentiment in your writing.
Good luck with your future learning.
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