Please correct my writing. Thank you.

Letter of Application for Employment.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to apply for the guide position that you have advertised in the international magazine.
I have worked as a tourism manager for a few years and gained the ability to work with many different types of people. I am very motivated and determined in my work. This means that I have excellent communication skills. I am interested in the history and culture of different countries and my talent and enthusiasm in telling stories about them is highly developed. My level of English is very good as I have spent many of my holidays in England. Also, I have basic knowledge of Spanish, German and French.
I would like to add that I have prepared several interesting stories about European capitals and other historical places which I would be delighted to visit. As for other personal qualities which might be useful, I can easily withstand long bus trips and am a first-aider.
I hope you consider my application and give me a chance to join your team.

Yours faithfully,

Please correct my writing work. Thank you.

Letter of application.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to apply for the guide position that you have advertised in the International magazine.

I have worked as a tourism manager for a few years and gained the ability to work with many different types of people. I am very motivated and determined at my work. This means that I have excellent communication skills. Interested in history and culture of different countries, my talent and enthusiasm in telling stories are highly developed. My level of English is very good as I have spent many of my holidays in England. Also, I have basic knowledge of Spanish, German and French. I would like to add that I have prepared several interesting stories about European capitals and other historic places which I would be delighted to visit.

As for other personal qualities which be useful, I can easily withstand long bus trips and have knowledge of giving first-aid.

I hope you will consider my application and give me a chance to join your team.

Yours faithfully,

Hello Anna,

Just a few small improvements to your text. I presume that 'International' is the name of a magazine - you would normally say the name of the magazine/paper in which you saw the advertisement. There is no word 'determinative' in common use in the English language and 'brightly' does not go with 'developed' but 'highly' does and I think this is the meaning you want to convey.

All the best

Bob