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About my goals for 2016 I'd like to get a scholarship in my country to go studying outside. Frequently, every programme is done in English so I have to improve my skills quickly. Furthermore, to apply to the scholarship, your English level has to be high. I also have to work hard to save money for living while studying abroad, specially to travel and know new places wjile being there. I have some friends who are already living in other countries and they say that's an awsome experience which everybody would live. I want to grow up as a person and also as a professional. I hope I'll get it.

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About My Goals for 2016

I'd like to get a scholarship in my country to go studying abroad.
Frequently, every programme is done in English so I have to improve my skills quickly. Furthermore, to apply for the scholarship, your English level has to be high.
I also have to work hard to save money for living expenses while studying abroad, especially to travel and visit new places while being there.
I have some friends who are already living in other countries and they say that's an awesome experience which everybody would like to experience.
I want to grow as a person and also as a professional.
I hope I'll get it.

 

*****In the US we spell programme this way: programme. In the United Kingdom (England, Ireland etc.) they spell it programme. Both are acceptable.

*****"to grow as a person".....

 

I hope these corrections are helpful to you.  Buena Suerte! 

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About my goals for 2016

I'd (I would) like to get a scholarship in my country to go study abroad studying outside.
Frequently, Every program is done in requires/uses English so I have to improve my skills quickly. Furthermore, you need a certain English level in order to apply for the scholarship.



I will also have to work hard to save money for earn a living while studying abroad, especially to when traveling and know exploring new places wjile while being there.
I have some friends who are already living in other countries and they say that's an it is truly an awesome experience which everybody would live  admire.
Therefore,  I want to grow up as a more mature person, acquiring professional skills in the process of gaining valuable insights .
As there is a saying, Where there is a will, there is a way. I hope I'll get it.


Good luck! :)

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About my goals for 2016

I'd like to get a scholarship in my country to study abroad go studying outside.
Frequently  Most often, such programmes are done in English, so I have to improve my skills quickly. Furthermore, to apply for the scholarship, your English level has to be high.
I also have to work hard to save money for living while studying abroad, especially to travel and get to know new places while being there.
I have some friends who are already living in other countries and they say that's an awesome experience which everybody should have would live.
I want to grow up as a person and also as a professional.   (to grow = crecer;  to grow up = hacerse mayor)
I hope I'll get it.

(program = US;  programme = UK)

(I hope you get it too.)


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