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a beautiful girl This morning, I attended wedding of my colleague and saw a beautiful girl, I really like her smiles, I was totally into her and I think she is my type. However, not long after, my colleague said that she were married, I was disappointed and had a few regret. Why does she get married so soon, why I don’t see you before you commit to someone ?

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a beautiful girl

This morning, I attended the wedding of my colleague and saw a beautiful girl. I really liked her smile like her smiles [OR the way she smiled], I was totally into her and I thought think she was is my type.

 

However, not long after, my colleague said that she is were married. I was disappointed and felt sorry for myself had a few regret.


Why did does she get married so soon; why didnt I don’t see you before you committed to someone else?

 

don't worry! there are so many other amazing single women out there. getting hung up on someone who's already taken is not worth it ;)

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Great job on the post. I know that feeling/

 

 

This morning, I attended my colleague's wedding and saw a beautiful girl. I really liked her smile.  I was totally into her and I thought she was my type (aren't they all? :p). However, not long after (you could also say "a little bit later"), my colleague said that she is married. I was disappointed and had a few regrets.

[Using "regret" here doesn't really work. "Regret" implies that you did something silly. You could say "I regret the fact that she is already married" but it sounds too formal for this situation].

 

Why did she get married so soon, why didn’t I see you before you commited to someone ?

 

Great job! Remember, there are always other fish in the see.

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A beautiful girl

This morning, I attended my colleague's wedding of my colleague and saw a beautiful girl, I really liked her smiles. I was totally into her and I thought think she was my type. However, not long after, my colleague said that she was were married, I was disappointed and sad. had a few regret.
Why did does she get married so young soon, why didn't I don’t see her you before she you committed to someone else?

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a beautiful girl

This morning, I attended a wedding of a colleague of mine and saw a beautiful girl,and I really like her smiles . I was totally into her, and I think she is my type. However, not long after, my colleague said that she is (already) married ; I was disappointed and had a few regrets.
Why did she get married so soon ?  Why didnt I see her before she was committed to someone ?

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