Happy New Year

The boss praised my dad for his excellent work, so we traveled in Japan before Spring festival. I kept writing a diary on our visit to Japan. It reminds me of my childhood. My mother, who is a buxom and sophisticated, had an enormous influence on my life. She encouraged me to have the lifelong habit of recording my impressions in a diary each night. She read widely and avidly, with a fondness for Chinese literature. Anyway, we had an idyllic time on our journey.

Thank you for your revising, everyone.

(Is your mother deceased?  If not, you would not speak of her in past tense.  If so, I am sorry.  She sounds like a wonderful mother!)

Happy New Year

The boss praised my dad for his excellent work, so we traveled to Japan before Spring festival. I kept writing in my diary about our visit to Japan. Japan reminds me of my childhood. My mother had enormous influence on my life, she is a sophisticated buxom. She encouraged me to have the lifelong habit of recording my experiences in a diary each night. She read widely and avidly, with a fondness for Chinese literature. Anyway, we spent idyllic time on the journey.

Thank you for your revising, everyone.