If there are any mistakes,repetitions or if something grates on your ear, pleeaase correct it! Part2

I put much alot of effort on it in to changing myself. Through even though I was confused and embarrassed I started to say everything I thought, was teaching I learnt how to give my opinion and to say no, always reminding myself “I have a right for to do it, I’m not worse then than the rest, they may think everything what they want, I don’t care”. The same told me my friend told me the same thing. and Even now, from time when we recall the school past and laugh at it, I tell that say how I’m thankful I am to her. To become friends with her was may be the best decision I ever made, which really completely changed me. So, my so called autotraining worked. I finally relaxed. Then I noticed that rather many other people wanted to be friends with us and supported me in my changes.
I took a risk, overcame my self doubt and gained even much more than confidence and independence. With more help from new friends. I learned to cope with stress and to control my emotions. I stopped taking everything close to heart, became tranquil and just stronger in general . It seemed that all my fears and problems (the majority of which were just in my head) disappeared by themselves.
As the time went on, everything was getting continued to get better. I stopped complaining and didn’t like those who did had this habit. And still don’t like. Because moaning doesn’t solve the problems , but just exhausts, makes you be weaker , spoils your mood and the mood of people around you. I also strive to try something new things. For example in March I’m going to participate in a Japanese speech contest, and next autumn I’d like to take part in “Miss Kharkov”. What I’m losing after all? Nothing. After all I've nothing to lose.
I feel totally comfortable. I am a the person I wanted to be . And now I can surely say, if you don’t like something , don’t hesitate to change it even if it seems futile and scary. All the effort will be justified worthwhile.

If there are any mistakes,_repetitions or if something grates in your ear, please correct it! Part_2

I put much efforts on into it . Through confusion and embarrassment, I started to say everything I thought, was teaching learning to protect my opinion and to say "no", always reminding myself “I have a right for to it, I’m not worse then the rest, they may can think anything they want, I don’t care”. The My friend same told me my friendthe same thing, and even now, from time to time, when we recall the school past and laugh at it, I tell that I’m thankful grateful* to her. To become friends with her was maybe the best decision I ever made, which one that really completely changed me. So, my so-called autotraining worked. I finally relaxed. Then I noticed that rather many people wanted to be friends with us and supported me in my changes.

I took a risk, overcame myself and gained even much more than confidence, independence from opinions and new friends. I learned to cope with stress and control my emotions, stopped taking everything close to heart, became tranquil and just stronger in general. It seemed that all my fears and problems (the majority of which were just in my head) disappeared by themselves.

As the time went on, everything was getting better. I stopped complaining and didn’t like those who had this habit. And still don’t. like. Because moaning grumbling** {complaining} doesn’t solve the problems, but just exhausts, makes you be weaker, spoils your mood and the mood of the people around you. I also strive to try something new. For example, in March, I’m going to participate in a Japanese speech contest, and next autumn, I’d like to take part in “Miss Kharkov”. What would I’m lose after all? Nothing.
I feel totally comfortable. I am a the person I wanted to be. And now I can surely say, if you don’t like something, don’t hesitate to change it even if it seems futile and scary. All the efforts will be justified.

*"Grateful to her" means that you appreciate what she did, "thankful for her" means that you appreciate knowing her. We don't use the construction "thankful to".

**"Moaning" also has a sexual connotation, so it's better to avoid using it.

If there are any mistakes, or repetitions or if something grates on your ear, pleeaase correct it! Part2

I put much efforts on into it . Through confusion and embarrassment I started to say everything I thought (1), I was teaching taught to protect my opinion and to say no, always reminding myself “I have a right for it, I’m not worse than the rest, they may think anything they want, I don’t care”. My friend told me the same told me my friend, and even now from time to time when we recall the school past (2) and laugh at it, I tell her that I’m thankful to her. To become friends with her was may be the best decision I ever made (3), which really completely changed me. So, my so called autotraining worked. I finally relaxed. Then I noticed that rather many people wanted to be friends with us and supported me in my changes.
I took a risk, overcame myself(my inhibitions) and gained even much more than confidence, I got independence from imposed opinions and made new friends. I learned to cope with stress and control my emotions, stopped taking everything close to heart, became tranquil and just stronger in general. It seemed that all my fears and problems (the majority of which were just in my head) disappeared by themselves.
As the time went on, everything was getting better. I stopped complaining and didn’t like those who had this habit. And I still don’t like it because moaning doesn’t solve the problems , but just exhausts you, makes you be weaker , spoils your mood and the mood of people around. I also strive to try something new. For example in March I’m going to participate in a Japanese speech contest, and next Autumn I’d like to take part in “Miss Kharkov”. What I’m am I losing after all? Nothing.
I feel totally comfortable. I am a the person I wanted to be. And Now I can surely say, if you don’t like something, don’t hesitate to change it, even if it seems futile and scary. All the efforts will be justified(rewarded).

It took a while for me to do, but this is very good Alina. Maybe these notes help:

(1) better to say: "I started to say everything I was thinking" or "I started to say everything that came into my head"

(2) I would suggest either "... when we remember school ..." or "... when we recall the past ..."

(3) I would suggest either "... with her was the best decision I ever made ..." or "... with her may have been the best decision I ever made ..."

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