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Downton Abbey 1.7. Close family came from London. Everyone missed about Downton. Lady Grantham invated the doctor. There was a pleasant news. She was pregnant. There was unusualy, because she was 40 something years. Before it butler of Downton said to Lord Grantham about cook, that she was need get to therapy her eyes. Lord Grantham decided to send her to London in hospital. Anna went with her. Anna met with mr.Bates mother, who said her about mr.Bates secret. Meanwhile Lady Grantham enjoed as pregnant woman and to got a bath. The maid helped for her. Lady Granthm accidentaly dropped soap. The maid raised part of soap, one part of this stayed under bath. It was her revenge. When Lady Grantham finished to got bath, she fell. She lost her baby the such way. It was a big shock for her family, because there was a boy. This baby was their the hope about a heir. At the weekend was party. Mathew asked Mary about his proposed. She answered nothing. He decided to back in Manchester. Mary was sad. He loved her, but she coudn't decide about married. Lord Grantham got letter. In this letter was news about start the war betwen Germany. He announced to everyone about it.

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Downton Abbey 1.7.

Close family came from London. Everyone missed about Downton. Lady Grantham invited the doctor. There was a pleasant news. She was pregnant. There It was unusualy, because she was 40 something years old. Before it that, the butler of Downton said to Lord Grantham about the cook, that she was needed get to therapy for her eyes. Lord Grantham decided to send her to London in to a hospital. Anna went with her. Anna met with Mr. Bates's mother, who said told her about Mr. Bates's secret. Meanwhile Lady Grantham enjoyed as being a pregnant woman and to got a bath. The maid helped for her. Lady Granthm accidentaly dropped soap. The maid raised picked up part of the soap, one part of this stayed under in the bath. It was her revenge. When Lady Grantham finished to got the bath, she fell. She lost her baby the such that way. It was a big shock for her family, because there it was a boy. This baby was their the hope about for an heir. At On the weekend was party. Matthew asked Mary about his proposal. She answered nothing. He decided to go back in to Manchester. Mary was sad. He loved her, but she coudn't decide about getting married. Lord Grantham got a letter. In this letter was news about the start of the war betwen with Germany. He announced to everyone about it.

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