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Rock rules! Hello. This is my first time writing to the people, so excuse me if it isn't good at all. Well I really love rock music, but in a special way, because I don't share the idea from a lot of people, who believe that we should like all songs from one band, only cause it's big or famous, like Foo Fighters, AC/DC, Rammstein, Coldplay, I mean, of course they have wonderful songs and masterpieces, but not all of their songs are that good. In example Coldplay, they have Yellow, Viva la Vida, Every Teardrop it's a Waterfall, those are in fact really good songs, but there are others that really bored me. Even AC/DC have top hits, but if you listen the entire discography you will realize that a lot of their songs sound almost equal. So I believe that the bands have a 3 o 4 songs per disc that are good, I hate when a band have one single hit in the entire album, like the last one from Papa Roach, who only have Maria Brink's feature. In fact by far you can have the best songs from every rock band in disc with no more than 15 songs. Finally I think that there are good songs over there, in the Indy scene, which can compete with the big ones, and we don't have to fight about which band it's better, instead of that, we only have to enjoy their job. Have a nice day!

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Really good job for your first notebook entry! Here's a general tip for you; I saw you used a lot of commas and longer sentences when you could have had periods instead. Your notebook would have sounded fine in a normal conversation, but in written English it should have been separated with periods instead.:) But overall I'm impressed with your english! Message me if you have any questions or check out my profile if you want to improve your English even more!
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Rock rules!

Hello. This is my first time writing to the people, so excuse me if it isn't good at all.

Well I really love rock music, but in a special way, because I don't share the idea with a lot of people, who believe that we should like all songs from one band, only cause it's big or famous, like the Foo Fighters, AC/DC, Rammstein, or Coldplay.  I mean, of course they have wonderful songs and masterpieces, but not all of their songs are that good.

For example Coldplay has Yellow, Viva la Vida, and Every Teardrop it's a Waterfall.  These are in fact really good songs, but there are others that really bored me. Even AC/DC has top hits, but if you listen to the entire discography you will realize that a lot of their songs sound similar.

So I believe that these bands have 3 or 4 songs per disc that are good. I hate when a band has one hit single in the entire album, like the last one from Papa Roach, who only has Maria Brink's feature. In fact, one can by far can have the best songs from every rock band on a disc with no more than 15 songs.

Finally I think that there are good songs over there, in the Indy scene, which can compete with the big ones. We don't have to fight about which band it's better, instead of that, we only have to enjoy their music.

Have a nice day!

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