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Summarize paragraphs: Hibernation In the winter, some cold-blooded animals such as lizards, frogs or snakes often hibernate. They find holes or cracks at the base of trees or bushes to sleep in. Also there are many animals dig out shelter underground, they sleep in that during the months of winter. Some warm-blooded animals such as bats, mice or squirrels also hibernating when the winter coming. warm-blooded animals seem colder to the touch. However, their blood still very warm. When they hibernate, they almost don’t alive. Their heartbeat very slowly and they don’t leave shelter until climate get a little warm. Because it’s very dangerous. When these animals are hibernating, the animals use blood sugar and fat in their bodies to keep them alive so they are very thin and weak. If they move around too much and don’t eat, they can die. Normally, the animals eat lots of food before they hibernate. The hibernation help some animals escape the cold of winter. Contrary, many animals also find a way escape the heat when weather to become too hot and dry, this is called is aestivation

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Summarize paragraphs: Hibernation

In the winter, some cold-blooded animals such as lizards, frogs or snakes often hibernate. They find holes or cracks at the base of trees or bushes to sleep in. Also, there are many animals that dig a shelter underground. They sleep in that during the months of winter.

Some warm-blooded animals such as bats, mice or squirrels also hibernate when the winter comes. Warm-blooded animals seem colder to the touch. However, their blood is still very warm.

When they hibernate, they almost don’t survive. Their heartbeat is very slow and they don’t leave  the shelter until the temperature gets a little warmer otherwise it’s very dangerous (for them). When these animals hibernate, they use blood sugar and fat in their bodies to keep them alive so they are very thin and weak. If they move around too much and don’t eat they can die. Normally the animals eat lots of food before they hibernate.

 

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The hibernation help some animals escape the cold of winter. Contrary, many animals also find a way escape the heat when weather to become too hot and dry, this is called is aestivation

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