you see to come over (Have a look (?))

Hello, everyone.

Thanks for reading my first entry. My English is very bad but that's not a problem because 
I have a plan. I will study English hard this year. I think studying languages for communication (/in order to communicate) is very important, so I will need some friends (for this)/to help me. Are you interested?

Good job!

Hello, everyone.

Thanks for paying attention to my first article. My English is very bad, but it's not problem.
I have a plan. I will study hard (I guess, it is more suitable to say "I am going to...") to English in this year (You were talking of 2016, right? You'd better say the following year). I think studying language is very important (Did you mean that? I might have misunderstood you). So I need to some friends for this. Are you interesed in it? (You can also say "Are you in?")

P.S. Good luck in learning English! Ilya.

you see to come over?

Hello everyone,

Thanks for looking at my first article. My English is very bad, but that's not a problem as I have a plan. I will study English hard this year. I think studying language for communication is very important. So I will need to some friends. Are you interesed?