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Many people have done a lot of things in the history and it is a lucky that we conserve preserve many of them through differents forms: museums, books, etc.

¿How important is it to that we conserve preserve them despite of having put a lot of money on preserve it considering the costs of preservation?

It is often said that our past is the responsabilty of what we are those in the present. For this reason, it we study and preserve it, if studies and conserve it,  it will let us learn about mistakes in order to not go back to do it repeat it and it evolutionate to develop as a country.

The museums, and the books about our history are one example of this, they give us our own identity, and besides, of course it is a pleasure looking and seeing to look back and see  how people lived in the past.

While is true that, it looks to the future looking to the future is as important as conserve preserving our culture, our past. If we invest in the future, in the progress, we will recieve the results in a long time the long term in form of better healthy, transport, etc. Technology is one example of this, and all deppends  depends of on the government and how much money it puts into the progress, in the and technology.

From my point of view, preserving the past and investing in the future must be go together.

I agree that countries protect their identity because it is what deffine defines them as country, as nation, but of course, without forgetting they cannot forget the future, and the progress, what which are for me, it the most important.

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I think I got the right meaning with these changes.  The word "preserve" in English better captures the main idea. "Conserve" is not really wrong, but it's more about not wasting something while "preserve" means to keep something on the record, or the way it is.

One note, we don't use so many appositive phrases like "our culture, our past."  It's much more common and probably more correct to simply use "and" in these cases, e.g. "our culture and our past."

essay

Many people have done a lot of things in the throughout history and it is a lucky that we conserve many of them through differents forms: museums, books, etc.

¿How important is it that we conserve them despite of having to put in a lot of money on preserving it them?

It is often said that our past is the responsibilty of what we are in the present. For this, it studying and conserving it, it will let us learn about mistakes in order to not go back to do it them and it this will evolutionize us as country.

The museums, and the books about our history are one example of this, they give us our own identity, and besides, of course it is a pleasure seeing and looking at how people lived in the past.

While it is true that, it looking to the future is as important as conserving our culture, our past. If we invest in the future, in the progress, we will recieve the results in a long time in form of better healthy, transport, etc. Technology is one example of this, and it all deppends of on the government and how much money it puts in the progress, in the technology,

From my point of view, preserving the past and investing in the future must be together.

I agree that countries protect their identity because it is what deffine them as countries, as nations, but of course, without not forgetting the future, and the progress, what for me, it is the most important.