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I have birthday today. I have birthday today. Today my day was special but no one arrange a birthday party for me. I wait for fifteen minutes in night but no one text to wish me. So I put my phone on table and slept. Well in the morning my friends wished me happy birthday and it brings smile on my face. So what if my best friend didn't wish me, I'm sure she is busy in her work. So what if no one arrange a birthday party for me but still I'm happy. Deep inside I have wish that some day someone will arrange a birthday party for me and make me feel special. I have to wait for that day. Times passes so we should smile always. :)

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Today is my birthday.

Today is my birthday. Today was my special day, but no one arranged a birthday party for me. I waited for fifteen minutes that night, but no one texted me to wish me happy birthday. So, I put my phone on the table and slept. The next morning, my friends wished me happy birthday and it brought a smile to my face. So what if my best friend didn't wish me a happy birthday? I'm sure that she is busy with her work. So what if no one arranged a birthday party for me? I'm happy anyway. Deep inside, I wish that some day someone will arrange a birthday party for me and make me feel special. I will have to wait for that day. We should always continue to smile because time passes. :)

Happy Birthday! I hope that someone will arrange a birthday party for you some day. :)

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I have birthday today.

I have birthday today. Today my day was special but no one arrange a birthday party for me. I wait for fifteen minutes in night but no one text to wish me. So I put my phone on table and slept. Well in the morning my friends wished me happy birthday and it brings smile on my face. So what if my best friend didn't wish me, I'm sure she is busy in her work. So what if no one arrange a birthday party for me but still I'm happy. Deep inside I have wish that some day someone will arrange a birthday party for me and make me feel special. I have to wait for that day. Times passes so we should smile always. :)

Please take note of your tenses.  You are talking about now - today, but a little later on you are talking about what happened in the morning.

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