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Who am I? Hi, My name is Camila. I'm from in Brazil, Rio de Janeiro. I'm 29 years old and I'm Chemical Enginnering. I like movies, dogs, birds and traveling. My dog is a Golden retriver and is a furry animal. It's funny and clever. I like sculptures and paintings, but in my opnion the more intersting is sculpture because you have a 3D view.

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Who am I?

 

Hi, my name is Camila. I'm from in Rio de Janeiro, Brazil. I'm 29 years old and I'm a chemical engineer. (or, I'm a 29-year-old chemical engineer.)


I like movies, dogs, birds, and traveling. My dog is a golden retriever and is a furry animal. It's * funny and clever.

 

* This might vary from culture to culture, but in the US we usually use 'he' or 'she' when referring to a cat or dog, especially one that is a family pet. Personally, I always refer to the gender of an animal, but that is my preference; it is not a requirement.


I like sculptures and paintings, but in my opinion, sculpture is more interesting because you have a 3D view.

 

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Well done! 

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Who am I?

Hi, My name is Camila. I'm from Rio de Janeiro, Brazil. I'm 29 years old and I'm a Chemical Enginner.
I like movies, dogs, birds and traveling. My dog is a Golden retriver and is a furry animal. It's funny and clever.
I like sculptures and paintings, but in my opinion sculpture is more interesting because you have a 3D view.

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Hello Mooni, I don't understand this part of the text: "he says that people lives parallel to animals and you easily can find a sooth hanging in the place you hang your clothes after wash it." It was confusing. Anyway, thank you for you comment.
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Who am I?

Hi, My name is Camila. I'm from in Brazil, Rio de Janeiro. I'm 29 years old and I'm Chemical Enginnering Engineer.
I like watching movies, traveling and animals specially dogs and birds dogs, birds and traveling. My dog is a Golden retriver and is a funny, clever and furry Golden Retriever animal . It's funny and clever.
I like sculptures sculpturing and paintings, but in my opinion sculpturing is the more interesting is sculpture because you have a 3D view ("of the piece of art"; "of it").

 

Hi Camila, corrections are in red and suggestions are in blue, keep it up :)

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Hello Camila, that's a really good description about yourself. What have caught my eye is that you like animals, I love animals and as fas as I know about Brazil it has a wide biodiversity of animals and living things, I use to watch a TV show about an extreme veterinarian based in Manaus Brazil ( I guess is the name ) he says that people lives parallel to animals and you easily can find a sooth hanging in the place you hang your clothes after wash it. I am not from Brazil but I am also south american Colombia :)

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