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people have idea to suicide
Life becomes harder lately. Pressure from work place and stress of relationship with partner, friend or family, make some people burdened. If they can’t deal with those problems, they will become alcoholic or junkies. The worst choice is kill themselves. I found this article on Muy InteresanteBased on research from Instituto Nacional de Estadística in Spain, around 3.870 people (2.911 men and 959 women) were committed suicide on 2013. The investigation found that there are close connection between reality, impulsivity and aggressiveness.
In observation that was held on 1980, Robert Plutchik discovered correlation between impulsivity and suicide risk, especially people who attempt to hurt themselves over and over again. In other words, impulsive-aggressive person in daily life has a tendency to keep suicidal thought and attitude.
Whoever has these behaviours - impulsivity, aggressiveness, and suicidal- have shared the same neurobiological, from perspective genetics and neurochemistry. Actually unwittingly, a big part of population has idea of suicide for ending their sorrow. Luckily, only little percentage that executed that idea and fewer dies’
FOR MANY PEOPLE, Life IS
becomING harder. Pressure from THE work place and RELATIONSHIP stressES with
partnerS, friendS or family, make some people FEEL burdened. If they can’t deal
with those problems, they MAY become alcoholic or ADDICTED TO DRUGS. The worst
choice THEY CAN MAKE IS TO kill themselves. I found this article IN Muy
Interesante *
Based on
research UNDERTAKEN AT THE Instituto Nacional de Estadística in Spain, around
3.870 people (2.911 men and 959 women) committed suicide IN 2013**. The
investigation found that there IS A close connection between reality***,
impulsivity and aggressiveness.
In AN observationAL
STUDY that was CONDUCTED IN 1980, Robert Plutchik discovered A correlation
between impulsivity and suicide risk, especially FOR people who attempt to hurt
themselves over and over again. In other words, AN impulsive-aggressive person
in daily life has a tendency to HAVE suicidal thoughtS and attitudeS.
Whoever
has these behaviours - impulsivity, aggressiveness, and suicidal- have A shared
neurobiologY, from THE perspective OF genetics and neurochemistry. Actually
unwittingly****, a big part of ANY population has ideaS of suicide for ending
their sorrow. FORTUNATELY, only A SMALL percentage that ACTUALLY IMPLEMENTS
that idea and EVEN fewer die’.
* Which article? Are
you quoting directly from it?
** Where? In
Spain?
*** What do you mean?
**** What do you mean by ‘unwittingly’?
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