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help me with my essay thx! Ant Tribes There is no denying that “ant tribes” is becoming a hot issue in china. Sociologist defines ant tribes like this: "Ant tribes" refers to those low-income college graduates ( usually the generation after 80s ) who have to inhabit in groups in big cities because they cannot afford their housings. This group is the fourth vulnerable group besides farmers, migrant workers and laid-off workers. These people are usually high-educated, but they have to work in the low-level service field to pay their rent. Their life is terrible: impermanent job, poor living condition, lack of social security, low income but high housing rent, and some mental problems such as anxiety and frustration. Theoretically, they deserve better. But why these young people are bearing so many sufferings? Here are the reasons. The first reason is the fierce competion among the graduates in the society. As we all know that china has the largest population in the world, so it’s quite normal that the number of graduates is really big. But, on the contrary, the vacant job can be counted on one hand. In other words, the supply exceeds the demand. Therefore the graduates have to beat other fellows , which is the only way that they can find a good job with a high salary. The second reason is that higher education don’t match the social need. In recent years, social demand for college graduates can’t catch up with the growth rate of graduates, but the demand for junior workers and graduates of technical school has been increasing. This indicates that the high-educated graduates face an embarrassing situation—they can’t get a job because they are not qualified, and they lack practical skills. To be more specific, the specialities in college don’t meet the need of society, and college education usually emphasizes on theoretical knowledge, and neglects the practical skill which plays a remarkable role in finding a job. The last but not the least, the attraction of big city. Why so mang graduates rush into those big cities such as beijng, shanghai, guangzhou. The reason is simple. The big city has so many advantages: more employment opportunities, higher living standard, convenient trasportation, sound social security system and healthcare system. The college graduates are attractived by thoes merits, so they prefer to work in big city. Unfortunately, they just ignore the disadvantages—firece compition. As a result, most graduates can’t find an ideal job, so they rent low-payment

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Ant Tribes
There is no denying that “ant tribes” are becoming a hot issue in China. Sociologists defines ant tribes like this: "Ant tribes" refers to those as low-income college graduates (usually the generation born in after 80s) who have to inhabit live in groups in big cities because they cannot afford their housings. This group is the fourth most vulnerable group besides farmers, migrant workers and laid-off workers.
These people are usually highly educated, but they have to work in the low-level service field to pay their rent. Their life is terrible: impermanent job poor job security, poor living conditions, lack of social security, low income, but high housing rent, and some mental problems such as anxiety and frustration. Theoretically Ideally, they deserve better. But why are these young people are bearing so many much sufferings? Here are the reasons.
The first reason is the fierce competion among the graduates in the society. As we all know, that China has the largest population in the world, so it’s quite normal that the number of graduates is /really big/.  (Use a more descriptive word, "staggering", "considerable", "huge", "enormous") But, on the contrary in contrast, the vacant jobs can be counted on one hand. In other words, the supply of workers exceeds the demand. Therefore the graduates have to beat ("compete with" is a better term) other fellows graduates , which is the only way that they can find a good job with a high salary.
The second reason is that higher education don’t doesn't match the social need. In recent years, social demand for college graduates can’t hasn't been able to catch up with the growth rate of graduates, but the demand for junior workers and graduates of technical school has been increasing. This indicates that the high-educated graduates face an embarrassing situation—they can’t get a job because they are not qualified, and they lack practical skills. To be more specific, the specialities in college don’t meet the needs of society ("the economy" is a better term), and college education usually emphasizes on theoretical knowledge, and neglects the practical skills which plays a remarkable ("essential", "important" are better words) role in finding a job.
The Last but not the least is the attraction of big city. Why are so mang many graduates rushing into those big cities such as Beijng, Shanghai, and Guangzhou? The reason is simple: The big city has so many advantages, such as more employment opportunities, higher living standard, convenient trasportation, and a sound social security system and healthcare system. The college graduates are attractived attracted by thoes merits, so they prefer to work in big cities. Unfortunately, they just ignore the primary disadvantages-firece compition. As a result, most graduates can’t find an ideal job, so they rent low-payment cost housing.

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