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Today, my computer programming teacher gave me a homework. The homework is what do you think about IOT Technology in our lives. IOT is Internet of the Thing. IOT technology can easily connect to remote things. For example, although I left my home, I can control the gas valve through my mobile phone. I think IOT Technology is very comfortable and powerful. Therefore, I would like to be a competent IOT developer. also I hope to improve my English skill through writing italki practice papers.

Hello 이태원,

I think that IOT is an amazing advance but I think I would be too scared to trust it to do jobs like this. I don't even think I want it connected up with my electrical products and gas products. What happens if and when it goes wrong or gets hacked?

Just a few small corrections, homework itself is an uncountable noun so you can't have 'a' homework as a = 1. Also English begins with a capital (big) 'E'

Hope this helps

Bob