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my home town people! uh, hey guys! today I wanna speak about my home town Kumushdepe 's people.kumush depe is a little town in north of Iran.in Golestan state.it has very very kind people. i LOVE my people.here we know each other and we have a good realationship together.when one of us get unhappy all of us get too! when some one has a party all of us take apart. *this photo is my town .

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my home town people!

Uh, hey guys! Today I wanna want to speak about my home town Kumushdepe 's people. Kumush depe is a little town in northern Iran, in Golestan state.  It has very very kind people.  I LOVE my people.  Here we know each other and we have a good realationship together.  When one of us gets unhappy then all of us get unhappy too! When some one has a party then all of us take apart.
*this photo is my town .

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