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Hello This is the first my notebook. It's so cold day! My fingers is shivering. I had been learning English for a year by writing message to American at cellphone application. But I was so busy with work and changed my cellphone then couldn't use this application and it's hard to typing. (because this cellphone was cheap model.) That's why I stopped learning English. However I want to talk with foreigner again, so I started italki. Anytime, My favorite singer is Adele. She released a song titled "Hello". This is a nice song. Like it. I’ll translate this lyrics into Japanese. If you can understand English and Japanese, Please tell me my mistakes. I want to understand meaning of the song. Hello, it's me, I was wondering If after all these years you'd like to meet to go over everything They say that time's supposed to heal, yeah But I ain't done much healing こんにちは、私よ。 もし結局その何年間も、あなたが全てを乗り越えるために (私に)会いたがっているのだとしたら・・・ って私は考えていたの。 彼らは時間が癒してくれると言う。 でも、私はあまり良くならなかった。 Hello, can you hear me? I'm in California dreaming about who we used to be When we were younger and free I've forgotten how it felt before the world fell at our feet こんにちは、聞こえる? 私たちが若くて自由だった頃、私たちが慣れ親しんだ人についての カリフォルニアの夢を見ているの。 世界が私たちの足元にひざまずく前、 それがどんな感じだったかずっと忘れていた。 There's such a difference between us And a million miles 私たちと、100万マイルの間には あまりにも大きな違いがある。 Hello from the other side I must've called a thousand times To tell you I'm sorry, for everything that I've done But when I call you never seem to be home 天国からこんにちは。 私は千回も呼び続けなければならない。 ごめんなさいと伝えるために、私が行った全てのことに。 でも、私があなたを呼ぶとき、(あなたは)帰りたくなさそうだった。 Hello from the outside At least I can say that I've tried To tell you I'm sorry, for breaking your heart But it don't matter, it clearly doesn't tear you apart anymore 天国からこんにちは。 ごめんなさいとあなたに伝え続けるために努力し続けたと 壊れたあなたの心へ、私はついに言うことが出来る。 でもそれは大事なことじゃない、それは決してもうあなたを引き裂かない。 It's so hard to understand for me. to be continued later.

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Hello

This is the first my first notebook.
It's so cold today! My fingers are shivering.

I had been learning English for a year by writing messages to an American atusing a cellphone application.
But I was so busy with work and had changed my cellphone then so I couldn't use this application anymore, since and it's hard to type on (because this cellphone was a cheap model).
That's why I stopped learning English. However, I want to talk with foreigners again, so I started on italki.

Anytime, my favorite singer is Adele. She released a song titled "Hello". This is a nice song. I like it.
I’ll translate these lyrics into Japanese.
If you can understand English and Japanese, please tell me my mistakes. I want to understand the meaning of the song.

Hello, it's me, I was wondering
If after all these years you'd like to meet to go over everything
They say that time's supposed to heal, yeah
But I ain't done much healing
こんにちは、私よ。
もし結局その何年間も、あなたが全てを乗り越えるために
(私に)会いたがっているのだとしたら・・・
って私は考えていたの。
彼らは時間が癒してくれると言う。
でも、私はあまり良くならなかった。

Hello, can you hear me?
I'm in California dreaming about who we used to be
When we were younger and free
I've forgotten how it felt before the world fell at our feet
こんにちは、聞こえる?
私たちが若くて自由だった頃、私たちが慣れ親しんだ人についての
カリフォルニアの夢を見ているの。
世界が私たちの足元にひざまずく前、
それがどんな感じだったかずっと忘れていた。

There's such a difference between us
And a million miles
私たちと、100万マイルの間には
あまりにも大きな違いがある。

Hello from the other side
I must've called a thousand times
To tell you I'm sorry, for everything that I've done
But when I call you never seem to be home
天国からこんにちは。
私は千回も呼び続けなければならない。
ごめんなさいと伝えるために、私が行った全てのことに。
でも、私があなたを呼ぶとき、(あなたは)帰りたくなさそうだった。

Hello from the outside
At least I can say that I've tried
To tell you I'm sorry, for breaking your heart
But it don't matter, it clearly doesn't tear you apart anymore
天国からこんにちは。
ごめんなさいとあなたに伝え続けるために努力し続けたと
壊れたあなたの心へ、私はついに言うことが出来る。
でもそれは大事なことじゃない、それは決してもうあなたを引き裂かない。

It's so hard for me to understand for me. To be continued later.

 

Good job translating! Since my Japanese is not amazing, I won't try to make any corrections on that, but a quick point to consider is that when Adele refers to "the other side", I don't think she means Heaven (天国), necessarily. If you look up the meaning of the song, it's actually more of a metaphor for growing up and moving on :) 

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Hello

This is the my first my notebook.
It's so such a cold day! My fingers is are shivering.

I had been learning English for a year by writing messages to (an?) American(s?) at with/on a cellphone application.
But I was so busy with work and changed my cellphone, then I couldn't use this application, and it's hard to typing type. (because this cellphone was a cheap model.)
That's why I stopped learning English. However, I want to talk with foreigners again, so I started italki.

Anytime, My favorite singer is Adele. She released a song titled "Hello". This is a nice song. Like it.
I’ll translate this the lyrics into Japanese.
If you can understand English and Japanese, Please tell me my mistakes. I want to understand the meaning of the song.

Hello, it's me, I was wondering
If after all these years you'd like to meet to go over everything
They say that time's supposed to heal, yeah
But I ain't done much healing
こんにちは、私よ。
もし結局その何年間も、あなたが全てを乗り越えるために
(私に)会いたがっているのだとしたら・・・
って私は考えていたの。
彼らは時間が癒してくれると言う。
でも、私はあまり良くならなかった。

Hello, can you hear me?
I'm in California dreaming about who we used to be
When we were younger and free
I've forgotten how it felt before the world fell at our feet
こんにちは、聞こえる?
私たちが若くて自由だった頃、私たちが慣れ親しんだ人についての
カリフォルニアの夢を見ているの。
世界が私たちの足元にひざまずく前、
それがどんな感じだったかずっと忘れていた。

There's such a difference between us
And a million miles
私たちと、100万マイルの間には
あまりにも大きな違いがある。

Hello from the other side
I must've called a thousand times
To tell you I'm sorry, for everything that I've done
But when I call you never seem to be home
天国からこんにちは。
私は千回も呼び続けなければならない。
ごめんなさいと伝えるために、私が行った全てのことに。
でも、私があなたを呼ぶとき、(あなたは)帰りたくなさそうだった。

Hello from the outside
At least I can say that I've tried
To tell you I'm sorry, for breaking your heart
But it don't matter, it clearly doesn't tear you apart anymore
天国からこんにちは。
ごめんなさいとあなたに伝え続けるために努力し続けたと
壊れたあなたの心へ、私はついに言うことが出来る。
でもそれは大事なことじゃない、それは決してもうあなたを引き裂かない。

It's so hard to understand for me. to be continued later.

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Hello I'm sorry I know you're so busy.
Today I translated a lyric of "Hello" into Japanese. It's memo.
Hello, it's me, I was wondering
If after all these years you'd like to meet to go over everything
They say that time's supposed to heal, yeah
But I ain't done much healing
こんにちは、私よ。
あなたがここ数年、なんだかんだ全てを乗り越えようと

私に会いたいと思ってるのかどうか考えてた。 
みんなは時間が癒してくれると言う。
でも、私はあまり良くならなかった。


Hello, can you hear me?
I'm in California dreaming about who we used to be
When we were younger and free
I've forgotten how it felt before the world fell at our feet
こんにちは、聞こえる?
私はカリフォルニアにいて、昔の私達についての夢をみている。 

私たちが若くて自由だった頃、世界が足元から崩れ落ちる前
それがどんな感じだったかずっと忘れていた。
There's such a difference between us
And a million miles
私達の間にある、こんなにもある違い、そして遥か遠い距離。
Hello from the other side
I must've called a thousand times
To tell you I'm sorry, for everything that I've done
But when I call you never seem to be home

反対側から(地球の裏側から)こんにちは。私は何度も何度も電話したに違いない。
あなたにごめんなさいと伝えるために、私がした全てのことについて。
でもあなたを呼ぶとき、あなた決して家にいないようだった。
Hello from the outside
At least I can say that I've tried
To tell you I'm sorry, for breaking your heart
But it don't matter, it clearly doesn't tear you apart anymore
外側からこんにちは。
少なくとも、あなたを傷つけてしまってごめんなさいと
そう伝えるために努力し続けてきたと言うことが出来る。
でもそれはどうでもいいこと、それは決してもうあなたを傷つけない。
Hello, how are you?
It's so typical of me to talk about myself, I'm sorry
I hope that you're well
Did you ever make it out of that town where nothing ever happened?
こんにちは、調子はどう?
自分のことについて話すのはとても私らしいわ。
あなたの健康を願ってる。
あなたは今まで、何も起こらなかったその街の外でそれを作ったことがある?
It's no secret
That the both of us are running out of time
私たちのどちらにも時間がないことは
みんなが知っていること。

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