Essay,

This exercise is from exam FCE. It is about [a/the] role model. You have to write an essay.

Is it better for young people to decide for themselves how you live, rather than following the example of a role model? things to write about:
1. the influence of role models
2, individuality.
3. (your own idea)

My essay

It`s evidence that since we are born, we are influenced by many people even without being aware of it! In fact, if we didn´t have any role model we couldn´t survive. One example of this, It´s our parents since we are the child we need our parents in order to learn [a/the] different aspect of the life: education, principles, etc.

Therefore, it´s very important to have one model to follow it, above all, at the begging in your life, in order to teach what is good and bad. If we didn´t have this role model, which establish principles and values that we have to follow in our life, the world would be a disaster.

On the other hand, despite having one model to follow it, in order to everybody can live peaceably, each person must develop as [a/the] person with his own personality and his own characteristic. One of the most interesting things in the life, it`s the big variety of people with their own personality, if everybody were same, it would be very bored.

In my point of view, I think that it´s essential to have one model to follow it if the reader of this article stops and he starts to think in the different aspect of his/her life, he realize that we always need a model to get something. For example, if you want to become a teacher, football player, or actor, you always pay attention to other teachers, players,.. and why is the reason?

The answer is very easy because we usually need some person who guides us, in order to get what you need or want!