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learning a new language. learning a foreign language opens your eyes to new horizons. it is as like as a window that helps you to look at the out side off your home. in my opinion a language includes not only new grammars and vocabularies ; but also involves original cultures.we figure out interesting hobbies;ceremonies ;sports;businesses;cookies that we did not know them before. in addition it cause people have a communication with each other from all over the world without geographical limitation by means of internet webs and mobiles and other information technologies .they can ask questions about their problems and they will be able to overcome their difficulties by receive appropriate answers. in conclusion learning a new language has a lot advantages and we can not ignore them.so it is better to choice one foreign language and start to learn it gradually.

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Learning a new language.

 

Learning a foreign language opens your eyes to new horizons. It is like a window that helps you to look at the outside of your home.
In my opinion, a language includes not only new grammar and vocabulary but also involves original cultures. We figure out interesting hobbies, ceremonies, sports, businesses and cookies that we did not know  before.
In addition it causes people to have communication with each other from all over the world without geographical limitation by means of the internet and mobiles and other information technologies. They can ask questions about their problems and they will be able to overcome their difficulties by receiving appropriate answers.
In conclusion, learning a new language has a lot of advantages and we can not ignore them. So it is better to choose one foreign language and start to learn it gradually.

 

Hello Mojtaba,

 

I nice text about the reasons for learning a foreign language and most of your points are very true.

 

Be careful with punctuation, in English there is always a space after commas and full stops - they are there to tell us to take a breath after. Also make sure that all sentences begin with capital (big) letters.

 

Hope this helps

 

Bob

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