Please correct my English writing, thank you so much ^^
Dear all, this is my writing, if there are any mistakes, please correct them for me. Thank you so much.
"I really relish the feeling of traveling by bike from the early morning, probably at around 4 AM. As I can observe the interesting gradual transformation of the sky. When it is still dark, the sky is clear and starry so I can look up to the stars and the moon. A selenophile would love it colonthree emoticon. You can feel the difference. At the crack of dawn, the color of the sky changes little by little just similar to the static surface of a lake . Interestingly, you will never foresee where you will catch the sunrise. It might be from a spacious green paddy field or behind a forest.
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The air is cool and fresh
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Whenever I travel a long distance with my father, I can enjoy those feelings. Out of the sudden, the latest ride recalls that buried memories. Things haven’t changed much, but my father has now got older and I has grown up enough, merely enough to start feeling afraid of the cruelty of time. That this happiness is only transient frightens me up...
I gotta be more hurry"
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Please correct my English writing, thank you so much ^^
Dear all, this is my writing, if there are any mistakes, please correct them for me. Thank you so much.
"I really relish the feeling of traveling by bike from (the) early morning, probably at around 4 AM. As I can observe the interesting gradual transformation of the sky. When it is still dark, and the sky is clear and starry, so I canwill*1 look up to the stars and the moon. A selenophile would love it (colonthree emoticon). You can feel the difference. At the crack of dawn, the color of the sky changes little by little just similar tolike*2 the static surface of a lake. Interestingly, you will never (be able to) foresee where you will catch the sunrise. It might be from a spacious green field of paddy or behind a forest.
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The air is cool and fresh
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Whenever I travel (a) long distance with my father, I can enjoy those(/these) feelings. OutAll of thea sudden*3, the latest ride recalls that buried memories (to me)*3. Things haven’t changed much, but my father has now got older. And I have grown up enough, but merely enough to start feeling afraid of the cruelty of time. The thing that this happiness is only transient frightens me up...
I gotta(/have got to) be more hurry (/go faster)"
Hi Quynh, being interested, read your notebook. You write just well. Especially the scene is very beautiful and I liked it!! As for correction, you are already excellent writer:) So please be understood that they are for your reference. Thank you !
Explanations of the marks above.
*1 "look up" indicates the movement of a person(maybe you know..), so I changed to "will".
*2 I think "similar" does not have the usage of preposition. Hope you could check.
*3 Because "recall" has many sentence patterns, I added this to make it clear.
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Please correct my English writing, thank you so much ^^
Dear all, this is my writing, if there are any mistakes, please correct them for me. Thank you so much.
"I really enjoy riding my bike early in the morning around 4 a.m. because I can observe the beautiful transition of the sky. I can see the stars and the moon when the night sky is clear.???>>> A selenophile would love it colonthree emoticon.<<<??? You can feel the difference. At the crack of dawn, the color of the sky changes little by little, similar to the static surface of a lake . Interestingly, you will never foresee where you will catch the sunrise. It might be from a spacious green paddy field or from behind a forest.
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The air is cool and fresh fresh and cool
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Whenever I travel a long distance with my father, I can enjoy those feelings. Our last trip reminded me of those buried memories. Things haven’t changed much, but my father has now got older and I have grown up enough to start feeling afraid of the cruelty of time. That this happiness is only transient<<<??? frightens me...
I gotta be more in a hurry"<<<?
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Please correct my English writing, thank you so much ^^
Dear all, this is my writing, if there are any mistakes, please correct them for me. Thank you so much.
"I really relish the feeling of traveling by bike from the early morning, probably at around 4 AM. As I can observe the interesting gradual transformation of the sky. When it is still dark, the sky is clear and starry so I can look up to the stars and the moon. A selenophile would love it colonthree emoticon. You can feel the difference. At the crack of dawn, the color of the sky changes little by little just similar to the static surface of a lake . Interestingly, you will never foresee where you will catch the sunrise. It might be from a spacious green paddy field or behind a forest.
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The air is cool and fresh
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Whenever I travel a long distance with my father, I can enjoy those feelings. Out All of the a sudden, the latest ride recalls that buried memories. Things haven’t changed much, but my father has now got older and I has have grown up enough, merely enough to start feeling afraid of the cruelty of time. That this happiness is only transient frightens me up...
I gotta be more have got to hurry"
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