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How Travelling Shapes our Personality {Words in titles are capitalized}
Have you ever wondered about what travelling gives you?
When I was a child, I [1] was travelling used to travel across a Poland with my parents. Every summer, we were would travel to Seaside, Masuria (a beautiful Polish lake district) or the mountains. Our holiday was always very active, because no one from our family likes to lazy an idle vacation.
My Mother organised many plays for me, my brother and my cousins and me.[2] I think she also liked to play with us, so that's why we would played paperchase, build totems of sticks and cones and performed on a "Mini playback show"[3] at in the evenings. My dad showed me how to fishing and when I was 10 ten,[4] organised for our family a little survival trip[5] (which meant : sleeping on the tent, washing yourself on an lake, and stealing foraging carrots from the fields)
My parents preferred alternative and cheap {better="inexpensive", "economical"} ways to of travelling. So I don't remember exclusive hotels, sunbathing and or kitschy souvenirs. I know tent, forest, nature and eating soup from one big pot.
I'm really grateful for this experience. I think, that's why i'm I've become a creative[6] and very curious of the world person of the world.
How did looked your travels look in the past? Do you think, that these experiences could formed {better="shaped"} your personality?
Notes:
1. The pronoun "I" is always capitalized.
2. In English, we always put ourselves last in enumeration. (Ex: My dad and I went fishing.)
3. I think you mean putting on on a show" here, i.e. "We would put on/together a "Mini Playback Show".
4. Numbers up to ten are spelled out in English composition.
5. Okay, but it would read more natural as "...organized a little survival trip for our family".
6. "Creative" is a good word to use here. Another suggestion would be "resourceful".
Have you ever wondered about what travelling gives you?
When I was a child I was travelling across a Poland with my parents. Every summer we were travel to Seaside, Masuria (beautiful polish lake district) or Mountains. Our holiday was always very active because no one from our family likes to lazy vacation.
My Mother organised many plays for me, my brother and my cousins. I think she also liked play with us, so that's why wy played paperchase, built totems of sticks and cones and performed on "Mini playback show" at evenings. My dad showed me how to fishing and when I was 10 organised for our family little survival trip (which meant: sleeping on the tent, wash on a lake, and stealing carrot from the fields)
My parents preferred alternative and cheaper way to travelling. So I don't remember exclusive hotel, sunbathing and kitschy souvenirs. I know tent, forest, nature and eating soup from one big pot.
I'm really grateful for this experience. I think, that's why I become creative and very curious of the world person.
How looked your travelling in past? Do you think, that these experience could form your personality?
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