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my grandfather My grandfather is 92,we all love him and he also love us.But recently he is bad in his body health ,last week i went home to visit him,sometime he is sober and sometime is insensible, i was very sad when i saw him.Now he can't walk and only lay on the bed,even he is not only eat anything, but also only depends on injecting some nutrient solution to matain his life,maybe he can't live long time,we all have a very sad mood.i hope he will recover asap. He has a good relationship with me and my young brother all the time,he dosen't love my cusions. He always gave some snacks to us when we were a child ,and never gave my cusions,he was very fond of me and my brother.in fact my cusions don't lvoe hime as the same as us.

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my grandfather

My grandfather is 92,we all love him and he also love us.

My grandfather is 92 , and we love him as much as he loves all of us.

 

But recently he is bad in his body health ,last week i went home to visit him,sometime he is sober and sometime is insensible,

But, recently his health deteriorated .So, I went home to visit him and saw that he was sober sometimes and senile at the other times.

 

i was very sad when i saw him.Now he can't walk and only lay on the bed,even he is not only eat anything, but also only depends on injecting some nutrient solution to matain his life,maybe he can't live long time,we all have a very sad mood.i hope he will recover asap.

I was very sad when I saw how terrible he looked : He was now able to walk now and would just lie on the bed .He could not eat anything , and we had to inject into him some nutricious solutions just to keep him alive . Still, I hope he will recover asap.

 


He has a good relationship with me and my young brother all the time,he dosen't love my cusions.

He has a good relationship with me and my younger brother, but he does not love my cousins.

 

 

He always gave some snacks to us when we were a child ,and never gave my cusions,he was very fond of me and my brother.in fact my cusions don't lvoe hime as the same as us.

 

He would always give us snacks when we were kids and never to my cousins .He is very fond of us .

He would always give us snacks when we were kids , and he had never given any to my cousins

Note : the missing pronuon "he"

For a fact, our cousins do not love him as we do.

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