The first month in CT,US
Have came here for three weeks.It's more colder here than in Shanghai .The ground are snowed up everywhere. I applied the SSN and an account in Bank of America yesterday .Then made an appointment with the driving instuctor for the practise in the weekend. I have been thinking about the plan of my career. RN or CRA? I haven't decided on the direction of my own learning and working hard.
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Have came here for three weeks.（句子没有主语，还不是祈使句，而且come的分词形式是错的，句号后面漏掉了空格）It's more colder （more colder）here than (这里应该有一个that) in Shanghai .The ground are snowed up everywhere（这句话老外恐怕读得莫名其妙）. I applied （是不是应该有一个for）the SSN and an account in Bank of America yesterday .
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后面还有很多低级错误，但是不管怎么说，我能找出你错误，不代表我英语比你好，我相信你比我更好，你找我错误会找出更多。我只是觉得你的大词汇量和你的语法水平不相称。
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