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Please help to correct my mistakes Hasan Omidzadeh, An Iranian Devoted Teacher He born on Tir 29th 1333 (in Persian calendar) in Gilan, Iran. He was teaching in one of the villages of Gilan, named Bijarsar. Onec upon a time, while he was teaching in his class, students’ screams attracted his attention. When he got out of his class he saw that heater of other class was firing and the students calling help. He went to the class as soon as possible to help students getting out of the class. While he was helping, the class door was closed and unfortunately he got stuck in the fire. He couldn’t get out because the class door didn’t have any handle. Our devoted teacher’s body was burning within the flames of fire and he couldn’t get out of the class until education officials came and carried him to a hospital by an ambulance. His sever injuries made him to go to operating room for 17 times. Unfortunately, after 15 years pain bearing, eventually he died on Tir 28th 1391; peace be upon him. The education officials changed the school’s name to Hasan Omidzadeh.

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Hasan Omidzadeh, An Iranian Devoted Teacher

He was born on Tir 29th 1333 (in Persian calendar) in Gilan, Iran. He taught in Bijarsar, a village of Gilan.. Once upon a time, while he was teaching in his class, the screams of students attracted his attention. When he got out of his class he saw that heater of other class was on fire and the students were calling for help. He went to the class as soon as possible to help students to get out. of the class While he was helping, the class door shut and unfortunately he was caught in the fire. He was not able to get out because the class door didn’t have a handle.

The devoted teacher’s body was burnt in the fire. and he couldn’t get out of the class until Education officials brought him to hospital via ambulance. His severe injuries made him to go to operating room for 17 times. Due to his severe injuries, he was operated on 17 times. Unfortunately, after living in pain for 15 years he eventually he died on Tir 28th 1391; peace be upon him. The education officials changed the school’s name to Hasan Omidzadeh.

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Wow! What a story! What a great man. Peace be upon him.

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