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i want to buy a dog.
When I was a little girl,I liked dogs very much.I had a dog just once.My father bought it for me.
It's name was "Huzi".
It is a Chinese word for tiger.
I liked it very much.
When I went back returned from school, the first thing I would do was to hug Huzi .
It grew up quickly,and became a big and beautiful dog. Or a beautiful big dog (compound adjectives)
But, it passed away as quickly too . I cried over it for a long time.
After that, I never have the chance to own a dog, and now I am too busy to have one.
Yesterday , on my way to home,I saw a man was selling dogs.
it is There was a beautiful little Labrador retriever(puppy).
It has soft yellow fur and big eyes.
The weather was very cold, but i standed I stood there for a long time, staring at that lovely dog.
I was thinking of buying it and bring it home to buy it home.
My heart is very contradictory.at last i gave up.
My mind had contradictory thoughts , and finally I just gave up on the idea
I am still regreting it for that now.
Notes : Always start a sentence with a capital letter .and i is always I
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