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Do you like TV show?? first of all.. I was big suprised that many kind of people revised my notepad. it's really helpful.. ^^ I really like to watch a TV show. most of that I like 삼시세끼.. it is broadcasted on friday 9:45PM. this program shows the island life of three guys 차승원, 유해진, 손호준(they are actors). they make their food themselves. it is the main rule of this show. they are fishing and gathering the hard shell mussel and a brown seaweed, tangle and so on to eat. this show is very popular in korea. the reason why this program is popular for korean people is they show the lazy life. I think many korean are pushed to do busy by society. but 삼시세끼 shows more relaxed life. and the perfomers on this program have time to remind theirselves with nature... Do you like TV show?? what's your favorite TV show?? and why? Ps.. I guess I made a many errors. a lot of revision make me lost my self-confidence.. so if you have a little time, would you point at the good thing on my notepad?? anyway~ thank you for reading ~ ^^

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Do you like TV?


First of all.. I was very suprised that many different kinds of people revised my notepad. It's really helpful.. ^^

I really like to watch TV shows. Most of all I like 삼시세끼.. it is broadcasted on Fridays at 9:45PM. This program shows the island life of three guys 차승원, 유해진 and 손호준 (they are actors). They make their food themselves. It is the main rule of this show. They are fishing and gathering the hard shelled mussels and brown seaweed, untangling it and so on to eat. This show is very popular in Korea. The reason why this program is so popular for Korean people is that it shows the lazy life. I think many Koreans are pushed to be busy by society. But 삼시세끼 shows a more relaxed life, and the perfomers on this program have time to reacquaint themselves with nature...

Do you like TV shows? What's your favorite TV show? And why?

P.S... I guess I made many errors. A lot of revision makes me lose my self-confidence...so if you have a little time, would you point out the good things in my notepad?? Anyway~ thank you for reading ~ ^^

 

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I think you did really well :) There's not a lot of red up there...;) Your use of vocabulary is pretty spot on.

I don't really like TV shows much though. I guess my favourite show right now is The Walking Dead ^^ Because it's so dramatic and I kinda love Steven Yeun ;)

 

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