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Travel
I like travelling, and I have visited many places before: I once walked on the Great Wall of China,and viewed/ admired the scene of the Huangshan Mountain, and I watched the sunrise on the Dongji Island, etc..
But that's not enough for me, I want to make a long journey,which will take some time , from here to there aimlessly. I want to feel (the) different cultures, and meet different people. When I feel tired I can take a break in a a small town, and have a part-time job when/if my wallet is empty , and then carry on travelling when I want to/ when I'm ready.
In fact , I know that will never happen, as my parents would worry about me, travelling alone (travelling on my own); they think that the society outside is full of danger. Morever, I need to work, and, if I had a long break then I would have to look for a new job, which would be difficult.
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