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A way to help children in our community
When I think about helping children in my community, I know this mission is very difficult. When you decide to enter into children's life you should know that it is a big responsibility, because a child is like a sponge, everything that you put there it will absorb. A good way to help children is through reading, when you read to a child you are building a better world, with more imagination, affection and love. The children can absorb the important concepts of the story and it'll fill some emptiness in their lives.
Vanessa u did a great job writing and you are onto something great :)
My absolute favorite quote for your topic is:
"Absorb what is useful, discard what is useless and add what is specifically your own" - Bruce Lee
It is something what motivates me everyday! Exposing children to that philosophy will influence them in a impactful way! Have a wonderful day ^_^
A way to help children in our community
When I think about helping children in my community, I know this mission is very difficult. When you decide to enter into children's lives you should know that it is a big responsibility, because a child is like a sponge. Everything that you put there, it will absorb. A good way to help children is through the reading, when you read to a child you are building a better world, with more imagination, affection and love. The children can absorb the important concepts of the story and it fill some emptiness in their lives.
Hello Vanessa,
What you say makes good sense, children are like sponges which absorb everything. Just a few small corrections and I broke one long sentence into 2 just to make it more natural.
Hope this helps
Bob
A way to help children in our community
When I think about helping children in my community, I know this mission is very difficult. When you decide to enter into children's life you should know that it is a big responsibility, because a child is like a sponge, everything that you put there it will absorb. A good way to help children is through the reading, when you read to a child you are building a better world, with more imagination, affection and love. The children can absorb the important concepts of the story and it fill some empty in their lives.
Helping children in my community is a very difficult mission. Entering a child's life is a big responsibility, because a child is like a sponge, absorbing things he or she may be exposed to. A good way to help children is by reading to them, leading to more imagination, affection, and love, which can build a better world. The children can absorb the important concepts of the stories they are told and develop an awareness to things they were previously unfamiliar with
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