A REPORT ABOUT A PET SHOP

You have a part-time job at a pet shop. The manager wants to have more clients and has asked you to write a report making some recommendations.

“Put a pet in your life”, by José Antonio
Introduction

The aim of this report is to give some piece of advices about how our pet shop which is near to the city center can get more clients.

Direct contact

First of all, we have to keep in mind plenty of aspects about the pet shop, which is very near to the city center, so probably there is a big population with pets. Some people suggest that it could be could be a good idea to give some publicity about the pet shop directly to the houses because a lot of old people who live alone usually have a pet and that type of person does not usually know how to surfer in the internet.For the rest of the people, it would be an interesting idea to create a website, where clients can see the contact, the telephone number, the address, and it is much easier if they can see this at home.

An event
The following measure could be to organize a “special day” at a nearby park where people could enter a the small quiz and the money earned would go to some charity foundation.

Summary and recommendation
On balance, I think it would be advisable to give more information about the pet shop because the more information you give, the more people come. For that reason, it is worth dedicating time to printing  information and sending it!

Hello Jose,

A report is a special type of formal writing used in business. The top has the format of an email and then each main part normally has a title so people can find what they want quickly. You have some good ideas but there are some mistakes which can make your answer a little difficult to follow.

Hope this helps

Bob