Promoting Traditional Chinese Culture

It is commonly believed that more and more importance has been attached to the traditional culture by the Chinese government now. For example, some traditional festivals have been officially included in the national legal holidays. Therefore, promoting traditional Chinese culture should be advocated encouraged.
Firstly, traditional Chinese culture is brilliant and great because of its intrinsic values. Both spiritual culture and material culture, such as the four great inventions of ancient China, Confucianism, Chinese poetry and so forth why not list the other two, if there are only four to mention ;-), reflect the creativity and wisdom of Chinese people.
Secondly, belief in the utility of traditional Chinese culture is also shared by Chinese people Chinese people share a belief in the utility of tradional Chinese culture sounds better. For the government, traditional Chinese culture has been taken as a significantmeans to govern the people and consolidate the country. For society, traditional Chinese culture is like a tie binding Chinese people together. The prosperity and peace of today China owes much to traditional Chinese culture this. Avoid repetition where you can
Finally, traditional Chinese culture, as a valuable treasure for every Chinese, has been passed down from generations to generations. Therefore, we are bound to discharge carry out the duty of promoting traditional Chinese culture.
In conclusion, promoting traditional Chinese culture has become an irrevocable trend, and it should be advocated by every Chinese.

Great formal writing!

- Be careful with collocations (eg. "discharge a duty" and "advocate culture" sound weird)

- Don't think that just because the equivalent Chinese expression （越来越XX) uses the same word twice we need to say "more and more" in English. This is a common mistake for Chinese learners. Unless you want to emphasise the change is SLOW and GRADUAL, just one "more" will do! :-)

- To make this even better, can you think of synonyms for "traditional" and "culture"? Good English style avoids repetition where possible. If you can't think of synonyms, even simple changes in word order (eg. the traditional culture of China) can give your writing more variety

Have a great day!