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Essay for FCE To my mind, it’s much better to do everything together than on your own. It refers to a lot of our activities, such as: work at school, sports and hobbies. Working at school, projects and taking part in competitions insists you on many ideas and efforts. The work will be finished quicker and more productive. Your classmates and you can exchange ideas and have brainstorming. If your friends and you do the same sports together you have a great opportunity to support each other and enjoy your wins. Besides, you constantly have many common topics for chatting. In addition to it, dividing your hobby with others will give you a lot of joy and happiness. You can not only envy your hand-made things but to create something new and fantastic. In conclusion, I would like to say, doing things together is wonderful but, on the other hand, you don’t have to forget that doing things together prevents from your concentration as in reading and homework.

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Essay for FCE

To my mind it’s much better to do everything together than on your own. It refers to a lot of our activities, when at work or school or doing sports and hobbies.
Working at school, doing projects and taking part in competitions requires many ideas and efforts. The work will be finished quicker and be more productive. Your classmates and you can exchange ideas and brainstorm.
If your friends and you do the same sports together you have a great opportunity to support each other and enjoy your wins. Also, you constantly have many things to talk about.
In addition, dividing your hobby with others will give you a lot of joy and happiness. You can not only be happy with your creations but also create something new and fantastic.
In conclusion, I would like to say, doing things together is wonderful but, on the other hand, you shouldn't forget that doing things together lessens your concentration in reading and homework.

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