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Practice My first steps in the golf. Three month ago I have begun the golf. That sport is very difficult. When I played for the first time, I don’t impact any ball. Also, I have taken six hours of lessons. Fortunately, the professor was very good. He explicated to me some secrets of the swing. The first secret is to have the right arm ever tense. The second is the bust rotation. These secrets are two principal things to know to begin to play and to have fun. But, they have more things to know. For example, I have to be at 5 centimeters of the ball when I swing I have to have the back straight I have to look the ball when I impact it I have to have the feet straight Today, I have more fun when I play. Also, I did my first nine holes. It was very difficult; I was at 40 of the part. I have a lot of progress to do, but this sport is really enjoying.

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My first steps in the golf.
Three months ago I began playing golf.
This sport is very difficult.
When I played for the first time, I didn't hit a single ball.
Also, I have taken six hours of lessons.
Fortunately, the professor was very good.
He explained to me some secrets of the swing.
The first secret is to have the right arm constantly tensed.
The second is the chest rotation.
These secrets are two principal things to know to begin to play and to have fun.
But, there are more things to know.
For example, I have to be 5 centimeters from the ball when I swing
I have to have my back straight
I have to look at the ball when I impact ('hit' would sound more natural) it
I have to have my feet straight
Today, I had more fun when I played.
Also, I did my first nine holes.
It was very difficult; I was at 40 over par.
I have a lot of progress to make, but this sport is really enjoying.

 

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Very good! Keep up the good work. :)

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