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A horrorful meeting One of the people Bruno misses the most was his grandma. She was 62 yeard-old woman, who had been dedicating all his life to performance. She lived with Grandfather in Berlin, in the same neighbourhood Bruno liked so much to live in. Bruno loves with all his heart his grandfathers. He misses the family parties, where all the relatives met together to share their experiences, to sing, perform and dance. However, they do not see each other since there was an argument in the latest party they had. In that occasion, Father , was so proud because he had obtained a new status : “Commandant”. As such, he had a new uniform which showed his power. All the family was very proud of him. Everyone except Grandmother. She was upset and hopeless with his son’s job. She doesn’t feel proud at all of the things that german soldiers were doing for the countrie’s safe and honour. So she told the family what she thinked of during the party. As a consequence of that, the family argued and splited up. Bruno doesn’t know what really happened there, and he is sad because he has moved away and he can not see his grandfathers who are far away now. So he decides to write them a letter telling them the news.

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A horrible (although 'horrorful' would be an awesome word, horrible means terrible; abhorrent means one should detest it) meeting

One of the people Bruno misses the most is his grandma. She was a 62-year-old woman who had dedicated her life to performance. She lived with Grandfather in Berlin, in the same neighbourhood where Bruno likes so much to live.
Bruno loves his grandfathers with all his heart. He misses the family parties, where all the relatives met together to share their experiences, to sing, dance, and perform. However, they do not see each other, since there was an argument in the latest party they had. On that occasion Father was so proud, because he had obtained a new status: “Commandant”. As such, he had a new uniform that showed his power. All the family was very proud of him. Everyone except Grandmother. She felt upset and hopeless about her son’s job. She didn’t feel proud at all of the things that German soldiers were doing for the country’s safety and honour. So she told the family what she thought during the party. As a consequence, the family argued and split* up.
Bruno doesn’t know what really happened there. He is sad, because he has moved away and cannot see his grandfathers, who are far away now. So he decides to write them a letter telling them the news.

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