¡Hola Rocío! Ya hemos hablado de este ensayo cuando hablamos hoy. Pero quería corregirlo aquí también en caso de que no pudieras escribir todo mis sugerencias durante nuestra sesión. También he hecho un poco más. :)

A PLACE IN THE WORLD

Eight years ago I moved to Gorliz to live with my little family. I'm sure it won't be the last place we live, but at the moment it is our home. Gorliz is a little town next to the beach in the Basque Country. In the winter there aren't many people, almost half of the houses are empty.... but in the summer it's crazy. For two months crowds of people come to spend their hollidays here, so the beach and the shops and the whole town are filled with vacationers. Maybe if you have a business it sounds good, but if you have to live through it, and you don't have any business to gain from the crowds, it can be unbearable.

At any rate, we have to understand that everyone has the same right to enjoy the summer, so usually we try to avoid the crowds and during the weekends we don't go to the beach until the crowd has left. Then we can have a very good time enjoying the sunset.

I don't know how much time we are going to stay in this beautiful place, but until we find another place, we will try to enjoy it, during both summer and winter...