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November, 9th Today was a usually day. I'm wake up at 8th o'clock, wash, eat the breakfast, which consist of bread with cheese, two cookies and cup of tea. After that i have looked online lecture on a coursera portal. It's a great site with many courses and i passing one. It's Algorithms and Data structures. It's in the fields of my interests. I'm working a programmer on a Python language and sometimes try improve my skiils. Tomorrow i will go to swimmig-pool. I have closed running season and will open swimming season. I hope i will learn swim well because now i and not good in swimming. Today i walked in a dinner on the street, around the park near my job and one interesting idea have visited my mind. When i read i Salinjer, "The cather in the rye", i remember one dialog between Holden and taxi driver. Holden ask him where ducks fly from the lake in the park in the winter? Then i didn't attach importance this thing. But today i'm thinking: Salinjer ask this question from self person or from Holden? The fact in that if a would be a taxi driver i don't answer this question, because i don't know too. Hah.

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November, 9th

Today was a usually day. the usual.
I'm wake up I woke up at 8th o'clock, washed, eat ate the breakfast, which consisted of bread with cheese, two cookies and a cup of tea.
After that Ihave looked at on online lecture on a coursera portal. It's a great site with many courses and I am passing studying one (or 'I have passed one already' if that's what you meant to say). It's called Algorithms and Data structures. It's in the fields of my interests. I'm working as a programmer on a Python language and sometimes try to improve my skiils.

Tomorrow I will go to the swimming pool. I have closed finished running season and will open start swimming season. I hope I will learn to swim well because right now I am not good in at swimming.

Today I walked in a dinner on the street (This sentence does not make sense. I am not sure what you mean. Do you mean you walked around while eating dinner? or you walked in a restaurant which gives you dinner? Perhaps you meant Diner which is the american word for a little cafe/restaurant that sells food. If you meant Diner, you have to be careful because spelling here is very important. In that case you would say "I went to a diner." but if you meant that you were walking around while eating dinner, you would say "Today I walked around the street while eating,"), around the park near my job and one interesting idea have visited popped in my mind. When I read Salinjer, "The cather in the rye", I remember one particular dialog between Holden and the taxi driver. Holden asks him where ducks fly from the lake in the park in the winter?
At that time I didn't attach any importance to this question. But today I'm thinking: did Salinjer ask this question from himself or from Holden? The fact is that if it was the taxi driver I wouldn't answer this question, because I don't know too either. Hah.

 

Note: Remember that every 'i' is capitalised. I should always be I, even if it is in the middle of a sentence. As you can see I have corrected them and made them bold so you can see that :) Also your English is good, you must only practice sentence structure a bit more because at times it can be very hard to understand what the meaning is. Overall, well done though, it is not an easy topic you have chosen to talk about. Practice with slightly less complex topics and see how you go!

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November, 9th

Today was a usually day.
I woke up a 8 o 'clock, washed, eat  ate the breakfast, which consisted of bread with cheese, two cookies and  a cup of tea.
After that I have looked up an online lecture on a coursera portal. It's a great site with many courses and I am passing one. It's Algorithms and Data structures. It's in the fields of my interests. I'm working as a programmer on a Python language and sometimes try to  improve my skills.

Tomorrow I will go to swimming-pool. I have closed running season and will open swimming season. I hope I will learn to swim well because now i and  I am not good in at swimming.

Today I walked in a dinner on the street, around the park near my job and I thought of an interesting idea.one interesting idea have visited my mind. When I read  Salinjer, "The Catcher in the Rye", I remember one dialogue between Holden and  the taxi driver. Holden asked him where ducks fly from the lake in the park in the winter?
Then I didn't attach importance this thing. But today i'm thinking: Salinjer ask this question from self person or from Holden? The fact in that if a would be a that if I wastaxi driver I don't couldn't answer this question, because I don't know too. Ha.

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November, 9th

Today was a usually day.
I'm wake up at 8th o'clock, wash, eat the breakfast, which consists of bread with cheese, two cookies and a cup of tea.
after that I have looked online lecture on a coursera portal. It's a great site with many courses and I am passing one. It's algorithms and data structures. It's in the fields of my interests. I'm working a programmer on a Python language and sometimes try improve my skills.

Tomorrow I will go to  a swimming pool swimmig-pool. I have finished closed running season and will begin open swimming season. I hope I will learn swim well because now I am and not good in swimming.

Today I walked in a dinner on the street, around the park near my job and one interesting idea had have visited my mind. When I read  Salinjer, "The cather in the rye", I remember one dialog between Holden and the taxi driver. Holden asks him where ducks fly from the lake in the park in the winter?
Then I didn't attach importance to this thing. But today I'm thinking: Salinjer asks this question from self person  himself or from Holden? The fact in that if a would be a taxi driver I don't answer this question, because I don't know too either. Hah.

Good job! For future practice, you should focus on when to use "a/the" or nothing,  as you seem to have a hard time with that, which is understandable because it is not used in Russian. Also, remember that present-tense verbs in English end in "-s" for third-person singular. Keep up the good work!


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