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ORIGINAL: Why do you like English ?
FIXED: Why do you like English? (Move the question mark over one space)
FIXED: Are you learning for work, because you want to go abroad, or another reason?
ORIGINAL: Neither of them.
FIXED: I'm not learning English for any of these reasons. ("Neither" usually refers to two items.)
ORIGINAL: I just want another angle of view of this world.
FIXED: I just want to see this world from different viewpoints.
ORIGINAL: You know,They are two completely different languages,
FIXED: As you know, English and my native language are two completely different languages. (You said "They are two different languages, but didn't mention the other language you're talking about.")
ORIGINAL: and there are two whole different cultures behind them,
FIXED: and each language has its own unique cultural background.
ORIGINAL: I think if I know both of them,I'm gonna grab more inspiration just like I do in the nature.
FIXED: I think that if I know both languages, I'll become more inspired, just like I feel when I'm in nature.
Good job, hope this helps. ^^
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