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Egypt flagHamada El Sayed
Leisure activities have become too expensive. It is said that to spend a good time in something meaningful and get benefits from your leisure time you have to pay too much money. I partly agree with that quotation, recently most of people squander and fitter away their time on something completely frivolous. You have no idea how much time is wasted on social media just for scrolling up and down, checking on what are the new feeds watching silly Ads. We each have 24 hours a day if you are either a successful person or a lazy one who always puts their things off. Every one of us must exploit the leisure time very well. Let’s go back to the first line I wrote and focus on pay too much money. Indeed if you want to explore a new place in your free time you have to pay money and also a lot of money if that place will be abroad. However, you don’t need to spend much money to get benefits. What about learning new things on YouTube in your free time, it costs less money than you thing -I’m talking about a simple things- Today after the big revolution in technology the whole world now is in your palm of your hand. Make a new friends becomes so easily than it used to. Do you remember the sail mail? My point is we are lucky enough to have all of that, we just need to be much care of our free time which enhancing our live.

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Leisure activities have become too expensive.

It is said that to spend a good time [you could also say "have a good time"] in doing something meaningful and get benefits from your leisure time you have to pay spend ["pay" is okay here but it is usually used for specific things, such as bills] too much money. I partly agree with that quotation opinion. Recently These days, most of people squander and fitter fritter away their time on something completely frivolous. You have no idea how much time is wasted on social media just for scrolling up and down, checking on what are the their new news feeds or watching silly Ads ads.
We each have 24 hours a day if you are either  whether you are a successful person or a lazy one who always puts their things off. Every one of us must exploit the their leisure time very well. Let’s go back to the first line I wrote and focus on pay spending too much money. Indeed, if you want to explore a new place in your free time you have to pay spend money, and also a lot of money if that place will be is abroad. [You could also say "especially if that place is abroad."]  However, you don’t need to spend much money to get benefits. What about learning new things on YouTube in your free time, it costs less money than you thing think. I’m talking about a simple things. 
Today, after the big revolution in technology, the whole world now is in your palm of your hand. Make a Making new friends becomes so easily than it used to is so much easier than it used to be. Do you remember the sail mail snail mail?
My point is that we are lucky enough to have all of that [All of what? The internet? YouTube?], we just need to be much  take care of our free time which is enhancing our live lives.


Good job!  :) I hope all my corrections make sense.







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