The My dream job

I am a romantic by nature. I want to be a guest relations officer on a cruise liner. Oh, a big white ship is perfectly.
But at first I must have perfect English, at and second I must  mash have educatian and experience in Hotel Management.
I wached 16 English lessons by Dmitry Petrov. He said if we want to improve our English level we can to write a diary darty every day and to read articles and books in English. Ok, I will try very hard much.
I also need to save money for my on Hotel Management training on Hotel Management.

The dream job

I have a romantic nature. I want to be a guest relations officer on a cruise liner. Oh, a big white ship is perfectly. But at first I must have perfect English, secondly I must have education and experience in Hotel Management.
I watched 16 English lessons by Dmitry Petrov. He said if we want to improve our English level we can to write a diary every day and to read articles and books in English. Ok, I will try very much.
I also need to save money for Hotel Management training.

Hello Katharina,

What a wonderful dream you have, I hope it comes true.

There are a few mistakes in your text and some of them are spelling mistakes. Remember that 'can' is like 'must' (a modal verb) and there is no 'to' after it.

Hope this helps

Bob